Clay Grayson

Name: Clay Grayson
Nickname?: Clay
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Straight
Personality:He is very confident and not afraid to talk to people. He is Fearless and loves music. He is a people person but sometimes likes to be alone. He is very simple just want to explore and Play his music with a good fight every now and then.
Looks: He has very black short hair. The sides more short and the top is longer which he styles it to go over just little bit one of his eyes. Clay is 5'10 and pretty skinny with some muscles that show more because he has low fat.
God parent: Bia
Power(s)?: He very strong then what he looks like but channels his strength threw his Guitar. He can push people back but it can have its tolls on him.
Backstory: His Father was a Musician. His father met Bia when Clay's dad was in the military. Clay's grandfather wanted his son to be strong before following his Musical career. She liked his ability to help rally his men on missions and would let anything stop him from completing them.  When Clay's dad died in a motorcycle accident, Clay ran away from home. Clay spent a year in the forest living in a tent and going to town to preform at a tavern to earn food til a satyr found him and he went to CHB. He spent most of his life In CHB but he has explored. He father was wealthy from a wealthy family so Clay goes out of camp then comes back months or even weeks at a time.
Strengths: Very physically strong and mentally strong. Big willpower. great at playing the guitar, is a awesome metal singer.
Weaknesses: He his sometimes hot-headed. His very prideful which sometimes leads to boasting. Clay also likes to get into people's business and spy on people.
Weapon(s): A guitar Battleaxe (A Axe with strings). he can channel waves of force through the instrument by vibrations or fight with it as a Two-handed weapon.
Other?:

Could you add a couple more weaknesses, and I don't understand the bit about the singing - a, what do you mean, and b, is it a real weakness? And could you explain the weapon, I'm confused. And also possibly tidy up the grammar, it's hard to read and understand.

Is that better?

Approved.