Logan Henderson

Name: Logan Henderson
Nickname?: (None)
Age: 18 - May 4th
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Straight
Personality: Logan is very outgoing and humorous and outgoing, and also very quick-witted. He's one of those people you either love or you hate. He tends to be a good influence on people and people end up becoming attracted to him because of that. However, some people view him as conceited and narccisistic which isn't what he's going for at all. It's just the way he thinks. He's overall a very lovable person and he has a very hard time making enemies. He's much better at making friends.
Looks: (Profile picture)
God parent: Athena
Power(s)?: Logan can snap his fingers and make any item he is thinking of appear in his hands. (Must be concentrating, which makes it difficult to use in battle)
Backstory: Logan lived with his dad until he died in a car accident when he was 12. Logan then found a brochure for Camp Half-Blood that his dad had hidden for him. He made his way from San Diego to New York. (With help of course.) He didn't even know he was a half-blood until he made it to the camp. He figured his father was waiting for the right time to tell him, but that time never came. But, Logan, despite not knowing what the brochure was or what it meant, found the courage to make it to Camp Half-Blood.
Weapon(s):Bresnger, black painted celestial bronze sword.
Strengths: Music, (can play guitar and a little piano) loyal to friends, swordfighting
Weaknesses: Fear of spiders, grows attached to others too easily, fear of heights, archery
Other?: Been at camp for 6-7 years.

Okay, Logan. Your form is pretty okay, overall, but there are some definite problems in it.

First off, you don't have a sexuality listed, which is easily fixable.

The second problem I noticed was that your backstory is three sentences. Not to be condescending, but a paragraph is 5-7 sentences.

Finally, your strengths and weaknesses leave a little bit to be desired. You need at least four strengths and weaknesses each, and you have one strength and two weaknesses. Remember that a little bit of detail goes a long way, especially in RPG.

How does it look now? I fixed the few things you mentioned. Are we good?